Revisions on chapter 2 done. Little break was what I needed. Now to listen through the whole thing while a robotic voice reads it. Then on to chp 3!

Working on revisions, here is a small teaser from the current chapter.

Not often I need to delete words from a draft—usually I under write and need to add more. So, removing 309 words is a big deal. Yay me!

#WritingCommunity #amwriting #scifi #fiction #book #revisions

https://www.europesays.com/1836351/ What to make of last week’s jobs report revisions #Economy #jobs #JobsReport #LaborMarket #revisions #workers

Here for #5amwritersclub this morning. Today’s task: ordered flow of ideas

(It’s sort of the “storming” phase of article revisions. You introduce new characters/ideas and *everything* has to adjust!)

Je suis en train de faire les exos du chapitre Modèle OSI et calcul IP d’un bouquin intitulé Cisco, configurez routeurs et commutateurs. Eh bah, figurez-vous que j’y arrive. Comme quoi on peut retenir le modèle OSI (rôle, protocoles, PDU, etc).

Si vous saviez comme ça me met en joie. Je vais faire un peu de conversion et de calculs d’adresses pour fêter ça

Mais café d’abord

#ProgressiveConservativePartyofNewBrunswick (#PCNB) #government’s #proposed #revisions to #Policy713 #prioritize #cisgender #comfort over #transgender #rights

#Revisions reduce #support for #trans #students, requiring #parentalconsent for #namechanges, limiting #extracurricular #access, and enforcing #standards that #harm #educational #inclusivity.

#Women #Transgender #LGBTQ #LGBTQIA #Canada #NewBrunswick #Education #Hate #Bigotry #Discrimination #Transphobia

https://nbmediacoop.org/2024/10/28/liberal-governments-proposed-revisions-to-policy-713-prioritize-cisgender-comfort-over-transgender-rights/

I've reached the point in the revision process of a piece where I'd gladly pay the fee I'll earn to avoid doing the rest of the revisions. #Writing #FreelanceLife #Revisions